In Written Language we wrote paragraphs about who our role model is and why. Here is our fantastic work!
My Mum is my role model
because she teaches me to cook, be safe, read and do maths. My mum is the best
role model ever because she has almost taught me everything I need to know. She
knows how to cut a log without chopping your leg off and at the moment she is
teaching me to cook popcorn, cut an apple and make gingerbread men. She is
someone who is kind, caring and loving and helps me while I grow up. She always
gives me good advice and shows me how to be safe. I can always count on my mum
because she always loves me.
By Joshua
My role model is my mum because
she always tells me what to do, like look both ways before crossing the road and
do really neat handwriting. My mum also teaches me to cook things like cakes,
pies, fudge and chocolate. My mum also teaches me how to read really hard words
in books. I will follow my mum’s footsteps because she always does the right
thing like when the house is messy she will tidy it up right away. Mum also
goes to work and makes the family have money and I know that I can trust my mum
whenever I go to her.
By Maddy
My
role model is my Dad because I like the fact that he’s been doing well lately. My
dad owns a retail company and he has got lots of people using Vend, which is
his company’s name. His name is Vaughan Rowsell and he cares for my family and
me lots. He’s also very talented. When I was about four, he rode his bike all
over New Zealand in five weeks, which really inspired me. I love my Dad and I
will follow in his footsteps because he has done really amazing things which
has encouraged me to do the same. I wil never pick another role model because
he is the best person I have met.
By Holly
By Holly
By Ishaan
My role model is someone I trust, someone who is
responsible and sensible. I want to follow in their footsteps. My role model is
someone who has experience in Maths and English subjects. My role model is my
mum. I love Mum. I can always trust my mum and ask her for help.
By Melvin
My role model is someone who is humble. My role model
is also someone who looks after me. She is responsible and she is a kind
person. She is someone who gives me good advice. She teaches me more
maths. She shows me what good behaviour
is. She makes me laugh a bit. She is also so sensible and she is also wise. She
is respectful and explains things to me. I can always trust my sister. My role
model is my sister Connie.
By Jason
My role model is someone that helps me and encourages me. She
always takes care of me. She is honest and fair and I can rely on her and that
person is my Nana. She is the person that I go to when I have a problem at her
house.
By Brianna
Here are some reasons why my brother is my role model. He
likes Lego as well as me and when I was four he built me and himself a really
col spaceship. He gives me tips of advice for building Lego structures, plus he
helps me research for my speech. He told me that Lego was first made in
Denmark. My brother corrects me when I do something wrong. When we argue he
always forgives me in the end. My brother is the best brother in the world!
By Daniel
My role model is my mum because she helps me with my maths and spelling. Sometimes when I'm not sure how to do something my mum gives me advice. My mum is nice and sometimes funny and she encourages me with my work. This is why my Mum is my role model.
By Jonson
My role model is my Grandad Gindle. I always look up to my Grandad. I walk to school with him. I respect him. He is so precious to me. I never want him to leave. I love my Grandad.
By Danielle
My role model is my mum. My mum is humble and kind. She is always in a good mood. When I need advice she is always willing to help. Mum has a really good job and earns lots of money for the family. She is never bragging and she is always reading from the Bible and I want to do that too. My mum is a great gardener and I like that in a mum.
By Michael
My role model is my big brother James. He gives me examples of how to treat my little brother and sister nicely and how to ignore them when they are annoying. He shows me what is wrong and what is right to do and if I am stuck in a difficult situation he gives me good advice. He tells me that I am responsible for my own belongings. He tells me that I am my little brother and sister's role model and I have to set a good example for them. He encourages me when I am too scared or shy to do something, but in the end I am not too shy or afraid anymore. My brother is an awesome role model.
By Amy
My role model is my mum because my mum is kind and responsible. I can follow in her footsteps and I can rely on her. My mum cares about me. My mum tells me what to do and she is respectful and sensible. That is why my mum is my role model.
By Meg
My role model is my dad because he is sensible and kind. He does everything correct. He is caring and gives me encouragement. I can follow in his footsteps because he is a good parent, not a bad parent. He encourages me for sport, doing art and doing jumps on my scooter and other stuff like that. He is the best my dad. He is a good parent so he is a role model to me. He can also be a good role model to any person.
By Simon
My role model always helps me with my maths. He tells me what to do and what not to do for my future. I will always follow his footsteps because he is really good at maths. He really influences me to do good things like to do what I'm told. He gives me very good advice for when I get older. The advice he gives me the most is about singers. My role model is my dad and it will never change.
By Hazel
My role model is my mum and dad because they are caring and they make good choices for me and my brother and sister. They are encouraging to me, they are kind, trustworthy and they are always happy and very sensible. When I cry and need help they help me and sort it out. They give me techniques for school and I can follow in their footsteps and be like them when I grow up. I love my mum and dad.
By Kelsey
My first role model is my dad because he is sensible and he helps me with tidying my room. When I do something wrong he tells me how to do it right. He encourages me with everything I do. Dad gives me good advice for the future. I always follow in his footsteps. He teaches me everything I know. My dad is the best role model.
By Alana
My role model is Sam my brother because when I do maths he helps me, he is also really nice and he plays with me. Whenever I do something wrong he helps me fix it and he give me good advice. He is a very caring person because sometimes we fight but we always make up.
By Will
My role model is someone that is kind, caring and responsible. She teaches me how to cook and if I make a mistake she tells me how to fix that mistake and she lives in Germany now. She gives me a lot of advice about life, she is very confident. I can trust her a lot and I know that I can tell her anything. My role model is my half sister Julie.
By Brielle
My role model is my cousin Maddy, she is 16. I think that my cousin Maddy is worthy of being a role model because she always cares for me. Whenever I am hurt she helps me go on. She also gives me lollies when I am sad. Maddy is also a great friend. She helped me build a tyre swing, it was really fast! Maddy is a great role model because I can rely on her.
By Carlos
My role model is somebody who looks after me and we both have big personalities. I look up to him all the time. I rely on him a lot. We do everything together. His name is Andrew he is one of my big cousins. I love him as a role model.
By Damian
My best role model is my sister Morgan. I chose Morgan because I know she is always honest and she is always there for me. She tells me if I am doing something wrong and I look up to her. She is very trustworthy because I know I can trust her very much. She teaches me new maths techniques and always encourages me. I know that I can rely on Morgan. I think Morgan is a great role model and will help me with my future.
By Devon
My role model is Mrs Poole because she is kind and caring. She is responsible and reliable and she teaches me maths so now I know that 68 + 23 = 91. I also know that half of 70 is 35. I also love the reading that Mrs Poole is teaching, she is the best role model in town.
By Kerry
My role model is my grandmother she helps me with maths and takes me to shops and zoos or Seaworld. She told me that Earth turns one circle = 1 day, when Earth turns around the Sun = 1 year and when the moon turns around Earth = 1 week. She tells me lots of information that I want to know. When I am stuck on something she always helps me out. She is good to rely on and she tells stories and sings songs and teaches me how to make dumplings. She cares about me and makes me laugh. I can look up to her as she is the best grandmother I ever had in my life.
By Jia Qi
My role model is my dad. He is the best dad anyone has ever had. He is sensible and responsible for what he says and does. He listens to me and helps someone when they need help and he would do it. I think he is a great role model and he will always be my role model.
By Madeline
Wow what truly special people you have in your lives! you have put a lot of thought into describing your role models. Wonderful writing!
ReplyDeleteMrs Tobin
Its so lovely to read these lovely posts about your role models. Not just because its great to see who your role models are, but also because you are such good writers. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt was so lovely to describe our role models.
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